Unpolished, Not Unworthy: Content Review Program

Helping you strengthen your story, one page at a time.

Whether you're looking for feedback on a single scene or an entire manuscript, I offer personalized content reviews to help you craft a stronger, more impactful story. Below are my service tiers to fit wherever you are in your writing journey.

Basic Review

Perfect for: Writers who want quick, focused feedback on a single chapter or scene.

You’ll get:

  • An in-depth critique of one chapter or scene (up to 3,000 words)

  • Big-picture feedback on:
      – Character development
      – Pacing
      – Conflict/tension
      – World-building

  • Comments on areas that need tightening or clarity

  • Suggestions to strengthen your opening, hook, or emotional beats

  • Delivered as in-line comments + a brief summary letter (1-2 pages)

Comprehensive Review

Perfect for: Writers ready to dig deeper into a few chapters or a novella-length work.

You’ll get:

  • A detailed critique of up to 15,000 words (around 3-5 chapters)

  • Thorough feedback on:
      – Plot structure and pacing
      – Character arcs and motivations
      – Dialogue and voice
      – Scene dynamics (action, tension, stakes)

  • In-line comments throughout your manuscript

  • A comprehensive editorial letter (3-5 pages) with suggestions and strategies for revisions

  • Highlighting what’s working and what needs fine-tuning

  • Answers to specific questions you may have (optional Q&A form before review)

Full Review

Perfect for: Writers seeking in-depth, holistic feedback on their entire manuscript before querying or self-publishing.

You’ll get:

  • A full review of your manuscript (up to 100,000 words; additional words quoted separately)

  • In-depth feedback on:
      – Story structure and pacing
      – Character arcs and relationships
      – Conflict, tension, and stakes
      – Theme and tone consistency
      – World-building and setting

  • In-line comments throughout the manuscript for clarity, flow, and engagement

  • A comprehensive editorial letter (7-10+ pages) outlining strengths, opportunities for growth, and revision strategies

  • Suggestions for your next draft (or next steps toward self-publishing)

  • Optional: 30-minute follow-up call to discuss feedback and brainstorm solutions